Pitch reflection

Pitch Reflection 

Are there any areas of the presentation you would like to give any more detail on?

The areas of my presentation I would have liked to cover was Narrative because Narrative was a major part for my music video because the song was telling a story throughout, another convention I missed out on was performance and I would have liked to give more detail on how it would fit into my music video and how I will use the convention in my music video. I missed out on my music theory and I would give more detail on it for example I would say that my music theory is about a guy thinking about life and how can he change his life, also I missed out on live type because for the title of the song I would need to have some graphic on it and I would have gone into more detail into the conventions and Goodwin's theory.

What did your audience identify as the strengths of your music video idea?

The audience identified that my idea was original because the conventions I chose and I used some of Goodwin’s theory such as amplifying and illustrating so this, made it original because I thought outside the box. The audience thought it was creative and it was a new concept also they thought that it was practical because the location I chose to film was a good location because it would match with the pace of the song.

What did your audience identify as areas for improvement?

The areas where the audience said I should improve on was technicality such as the camera work and the editing because I didn't go into a lot of detail and that I should give more detail on whats going to happen in the music video. The class gave me some ideas for one of the interest because I asked them a question and one of the pupils suggested that the interest is life and some of the teachers said that I should change the ethnicity to be black because the song itself is hip hop.

What changes will you make to your music video concept based on the feedback you received?

Based on the feedback I got, the changes I would make for my music concept was my music theory because I didn't give enough detail to it as I would have liked to and I would have made another change to the practicality but I wouldn't change the song, the audience suggested that I should use Narrative which I will use it and I will expand on my ideas such as the location for example i would use different location because it would make the music video more interesting.